tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6500425810028077954.post1605060894974080351..comments2023-12-16T08:10:02.915+00:00Comments on Wishbone Soup Cures Everything: False Start Friday: Charleigh, 1971Lisa Southardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09711376747848601409noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6500425810028077954.post-79571500265210898452012-11-18T19:20:45.047+00:002012-11-18T19:20:45.047+00:00There is more of this- so I might do more for next...There is more of this- so I might do more for next Friday- it is feeling like a project waking up already... Apologies for the slow reciprocation, it has been a very busy weekend. Necking espresso now to get some fresh words brewing! :-)Lisa Southardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09711376747848601409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6500425810028077954.post-91563799591606513802012-11-17T11:57:31.057+00:002012-11-17T11:57:31.057+00:00If I picked this up randomly in a bookstore and re...If I picked this up randomly in a bookstore and read this far, I would buy the rest. I know that isn't terribly helpful but it is well-meant. <br /><br />I too hope to hear more of Charleigh.<br />Bon Weekend!<br />HeatherHeather Robinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01316279029849503437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6500425810028077954.post-61272108641565977982012-11-17T01:40:35.958+00:002012-11-17T01:40:35.958+00:00Yeah, there's some beautiful stuff in there. L...Yeah, there's some beautiful stuff in there. Lots of emotion, too, by focusing on her self-image and the fact that it really bothers her. Nice. Luanne G. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15762881276976395955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6500425810028077954.post-68634381497382369782012-11-17T00:38:38.377+00:002012-11-17T00:38:38.377+00:00You create visible characters with a a few brush s...You create visible characters with a a few brush strokes. I am always amazed when I see that done. Geo.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16221314320558128986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6500425810028077954.post-20385985220191721032012-11-16T23:02:30.386+00:002012-11-16T23:02:30.386+00:00More please.
I can see her straining at the seams...More please.<br /><br />I can see her straining at the seams of her life...The Crankyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11482237436135513483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6500425810028077954.post-6057357240675105622012-11-16T20:15:13.238+00:002012-11-16T20:15:13.238+00:00Wonderful. I can visualize Charleigh, craning to s...Wonderful. I can visualize Charleigh, craning to see herself in the mirror, and struggling to cover her Dumbo ears. Not sure where you were planning to go with this, but it's a good start.Susan Flett Swiderskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09425315552148200073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6500425810028077954.post-50660630481696796822012-11-16T19:33:40.819+00:002012-11-16T19:33:40.819+00:00Great characterization, LT! I think this certainl...Great characterization, LT! I think this certainly has potential -- it's very easy to empathize with young Charleigh, and I think her story would be interesting.StratPlayerCJFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07341440379767694905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6500425810028077954.post-51308021560000308722012-11-16T18:10:44.148+00:002012-11-16T18:10:44.148+00:00Love it. I think you got the voice of a young gir...Love it. I think you got the voice of a young girl very well, and it touches on insecurities that people have at all ages. S.P. Bowershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09746614009206426805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6500425810028077954.post-68019214307605943442012-11-16T17:27:42.487+00:002012-11-16T17:27:42.487+00:00Do you have more of Charleigh?
Lisa, I'd like...Do you have more of Charleigh?<br /><br />Lisa, I'd like to read more.<br /><br />And I'd like to right punch the girls in the snout who push her in the corridors.Suzehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07908805179119217608noreply@blogger.com