tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6500425810028077954.post212993052992150774..comments2023-12-16T08:10:02.915+00:00Comments on Wishbone Soup Cures Everything: InarticulateLisa Southardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09711376747848601409noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6500425810028077954.post-64690750164890556352019-02-08T09:54:03.211+00:002019-02-08T09:54:03.211+00:00Thank you for this, Harry, and I haven't read ...Thank you for this, Harry, and I haven't read any Gaddis so that's another name for my TBR pile :-) Lisa Southardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09711376747848601409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6500425810028077954.post-78932651922729052752019-01-22T14:43:49.685+00:002019-01-22T14:43:49.685+00:00I like the voice. I can see a lot of potential, gi...I like the voice. I can see a lot of potential, given the character's limitations (can't see well and can't hear, at a minimum) in how you roll out what the disability is/disabilities are, in what happens to him, in who the people are the character interacts with.<br /><br />In "JR" by William Gaddis, Gaddis uses almost strictly dialogue with little or no description outside the dialogue, so the reader is left trying to picture what is actually happening based on the dialogue and how the characters are reacting, and that really sucked me in. It forces you to picture in your head at every moment of the text what is leading to this reaction. <br /><br />This sort of seems like it could be similar to that. Anyway, great voice!Harry Hamidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13176265571549991218noreply@blogger.com